how do i feel? full of thoughts, images, popcorn. the color of thought, the color of words seems to be missing. listening to music on my laptop, the sound is up close, and behind it against my window the rain is hitting hard in bursts. sometimes i feel the temptation to make things up in words, to have voices scatter all around and speak out my nose and ears. and then i read that again and it sounds silly. martin just came by after a party at his friends'. his teeth were a little blue from wine. his jacket looked all furry from the rain. i like these sentences of straight forward description, image and cause. feel more real.
posted by Liza 12.4.03